Wookieepedia:EC/Conduit worm

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Conduit worm

• Redux comments: Reduxed per Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 50.
• Date added: October 8, 2018

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:26, December 18, 2018 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:30, January 23, 2019 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:21, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Imp worm

• Redlink. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:05, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • Article created. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:06, October 13, 2018 (UTC)
• Intro should be expanded beyond a single sentence. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:05, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • Expanded. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:20, October 13, 2018 (UTC)
• The {{1stp}} should be mentioned in BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:46, October 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:03, October 30, 2018 (UTC)
    • Cool, now it should be shifted to before the sentence detailing the subject's Legends origins. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:08, November 1, 2018 (UTC)
      • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:33, November 25, 2018 (UTC)
• The length of the worms' feeler threads should be added to infobox. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:59, December 18, 2018 (UTC)
• I'm not seeing a need to reference the worm's homeworld being Coruscant to different sources in body and infobox. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:59, December 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:19, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• "Conduit worms were known to sneak aboard ships and eat their electrical wiring while still in flight." Please make it clear it is the ships in flight and not the worms. Tommy Macaroni 07:55, October 14, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:39, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

QGJ

• I'd like to see some context within the quotes' attribution for the speakers, since none of them are mentioned in the actual article text. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:51, January 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Addressed. I preferred to describe Gascon as a Zilkin instead of a Republic colonel, as there is an indirect mention of his physical traits. Feel free to change it. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:47, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

1. Redux per substantial edit. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:04, October 8, 2018 (UTC)