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PS-29-2
- Requested By: Fan26 (Talk)
- Date Requested: 23:44, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 17:02, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
Object
- A couple missing links.
- Infobox should mention Shadow Wing if that's their actual immediate affiliation.
- "he could be found studying" by whom? Rewording needed here, it's fine to just say that he studied the schematics in his offtime.
- Since it's already up for review their gender/pronouns stuff should be updated to comply with modern policy. Fan26 (Talk) 23:44, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
- All addressed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:01, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
- "Created for a card" + "of a second card in the set." Saying he was created for "a (singular) card" and then addressing he is used in 2 cards isn't nicely worded. Also, recent precedent suggests to state the cardname in prose. Unsure how that comes into play when 2 cards introduce the subject. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 13:55, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
- As precedent, simply writing that he was created for the card game set. Theron Nett is precedent. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:47, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Just a comment that the card literally said PS-29-2 could be found studying. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:30, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
Vote to retain Comprehensive status
—spookywillowwtalk 01:32, 20 April 2023 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 18:48, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
NBDani (they/them)Yeager's Repairs 16:59, 27 April 2023 (UTC)