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  • 1 Monar serpent
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Comprehensive status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Comprehensive status

Monar serpent

  • Requested By: CometSmudge (talk)
  • Date Requested: 18:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 05:05, 4 January 2025 (UTC)

Object

  • Does the book actually state that they're a species?
  • Millennium Falcon needs a publication year
  • The BTS part about the Invisible Hand seems like it should be put in the IU section, and the ROTS mention can be removed entirely
  • In-universe date of the Battle of Coruscant should be added
  • BTS is partly unsourced
  • I personally think its fine to say that they're a type of serpent anyway, so the last part of the BTS could be removed, but if it is left in, I don't see the need to include the extra details in the references. CometSmudge (talk) 18:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Skifffy (talk) 02:24, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Serpent should be in the infobox in the class field Lewisr (talk) 02:32, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
  • The release year source can be removed, the book mentions it so can be sourced to the book itself Lewisr (talk) 02:32, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Also fixed. Skifffy (talk) 02:42, 4 January 2025 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 01:18, 4 January 2025 (UTC)

Vote to retain Comprehensive status

  1. ECvote CometSmudge (talk) 02:53, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:05, 4 January 2025 (UTC)

Vote to strip Comprehensive status