Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Zol Kramer

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Zol Kramer

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:48, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional):Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:27, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:00, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
3. Please see my edit here OOM 224 21:14, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 14:55, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:31, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• It's not currently clear if Narec was killed by the conspirators or not
• There's a spot where I think you're referring to Kramer as a male
• The date in the infobox is inconsistent wtih the body. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:19, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
  • All done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:59, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
• The ref note specifies that Kramer's death was on the same day as Narec's, which should be specified in the body.
  • "After Narec's death at the hand of the criminals, his Padawan, Asajj Ventress, killed Kramer and many other conspirators in a rage before being captured and enslaved by Kirske." I think it is clear enough that the evnents happened all during the same day… LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:38, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
    • It's a reasonable assumption but think of it this way, we wouldn't assume it happened on the same day if that was the way it was written in the source. An "immediately" thrown in there would clear it up, but I don't know how accurate that is to Jedi Lost Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:06, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Crossing the data between D: JL and the episode of TCW, writing "immediately" sounds right to me. Added, thanks. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:59, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• There's a flashback of Narec's death in a Clone Wars episode where Ventress and Narec are fighting some Weequays and one of them takes him out, could that be acknowledged in the Bts with the caveat that it's not clear if Kramer was involved there? Not sure how that scene fits in with Jedi Lost though. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:42, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I had checked that flashback before nominating the article. Nothing seems to bond the Weequays to Zol Kramer. Maybe one of them is actually Kramer, but I think it would be too much of an assuption (even in the BTS). LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:38, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• I think it's worth mentioning the other named criminal here. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:32, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:56, 9 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:31, 14 September 2021 (UTC)