Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Zobyteeg

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Zobyteeg

• Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 10:34, February 22, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Two Tynnans for the price of... well, two. Hooray.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 16:41, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:03, February 26, 2020 (UTC)
3. Cwedin^(talk) 17:21, March 1, 2020 (UTC)
4. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:02, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• The HoloNet News article under the appearances section is missing the {{1st}} template. Fan26 (Talk) 14:42, February 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 19:20, February 23, 2020 (UTC)
• Per Anil's objection on the Razelfiin nom, you don't need an additional ref note to identify Tynna as a planet. Fan26 (Talk) 15:10, February 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 19:20, February 23, 2020 (UTC)

Cwedin

• "when it was destroyed by stone mites." - This could probably be sourced to the HNN article instead of the encyclopedia.
  • The encyclopedia entry states that stone mites were responsible. The HNN article is ambiguous. OtterSurf (talk) 10:49, March 1, 2020 (UTC)
• "no-longer-existent window." - Are we sure there ever was a window in the first place? My reading of the HNN article is that Big Z didn't have a window, just a wall, which is why seeing the lake freaked him out. Cwedin^(talk) 06:00, March 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • You're right. I just reviewed the sentence. OtterSurf (talk) 10:49, March 1, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• Unlike Razelfiin, I don't see any evidence that suggests Zobyteeg was a member of the Tynnan species.
  • It can probably be inferred from context. OtterSurf (talk) 10:06, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • I don't think so. That HoloNet News article doesn't even include the word "Tynnan." Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:03, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Removed. OtterSurf (talk) 16:36, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
• "Shortly before the Clone Wars…" As far as I can see, that CSWE entry doesn't say that it happened "shortly" before the Clone Wars. You might want to use the other entry instead.
  • The entry for Tynna says "prior to", which I have used. OtterSurf (talk) 10:02, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • I don't see why we wouldn't go with a more specific date for the event, so I've changed it myself. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:03, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Thanks! OtterSurf (talk) 16:38, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
• You list the CSWE in the Sources, but I don't see any entry mentioning Zobyteeg. Could you please tell me which page he's mentioned on? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:41, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • The entry for Tynna confirms that stone mites wrecked the government building, while the HNN article does not. OtterSurf (talk) 09:52, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • So basically he isn't. The CSWE just fills in other info. OtterSurf (talk) 11:50, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • If that's the case, then it should be removed. The Sources list should only include sources that actually mention the article subject. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:03, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
      • Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 16:37, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:02, March 2, 2020 (UTC)