- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Zelashiel
- Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:20, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I enjoyed writing this.
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501st dogma(talk) 15:57, January 13, 2013 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 18:18, January 13, 2013 (UTC) - Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 21:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:15, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
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You shold say what year Bane mentioned this guy- No specific year was mentioned, since Bane's text, The Rule of Two, was written during his time as the Dark Lord, I just put that it was during his time as Dark Lord.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:49, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
I've been told not to link things in quotes, so it may not be best to have the angels bit there.Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 11:04, January 13, 2013 (UTC)- I do agree, though I thought it would be a good idea since Wallace himself linked it.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
- 501st
Why is there a random ) in the middle of the quote?- Wallace's mistake.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
Perhaps you should add the fallen from grace part to the BtS?- Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:42, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
- 501st dogma(talk) 14:22, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
Why are you using a different template for the BTS quote? The formatting doesn't look quite right. Would it be fine if you used the normal quote template?I assume that Zelashiel was Force-sensitive. Could you make that clear in the article?Since the Book of Sith is an in-universe book, could you link to and mention the book in the body of the article?"prior to his destruction of the Brotherhood of Darkness, which ended the New Sith Wars." Could you make it clearer who destroyed the Brotherhood?The last sentence is also kind of confusing. Could you reword it?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:07, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Taken care of all, I think.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:27, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
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