- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Zaloriis
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:46, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I was a bit too excited to discover an element from Galactic Battlegrounds made it into canon
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Tommy
Macaroni 15:48, May 10, 2018 (UTC) 
Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:52, May 18, 2018 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:04, May 19, 2018 (UTC)
- Maybe you'll tackle Juggernaut next? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:14, May 19, 2018 (UTC)
- I'd have to get into Commander first, seems unlikely at this stage. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:53, May 19, 2018 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 21:45, May 20, 2018 (UTC)
Object
Tommy
In the BTS, you should mention the canon stuff first, then the Legends background.- Very well then
Context on the Empire?- Ended up providing some responding to the era objection
Could we get Imperial Era in there to create a rough timeframe?- Sure
Why do you link to Galactic Empire/Legends in the BTS and not Alliance to Restore the Republic/Legends?Tommy Macaroni 13:14, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
- Because my life is a mess. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:08, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
Can the fact that ESB was released in 1980 be sourced to So You Want to Be a Jedi?Tommy Macaroni 14:21, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
- It cannot. Sourced it to the film itself, the year is present in the credits. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:41, May 10, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead
The final sentence of the body makes it sounds like he was fighting there during his actual promotion. Is this the case, or should it be something like "prior to attaining the rank of general" or "while on his way to becoming a general" or something.Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:50, May 16, 2018 (UTC)- Better? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:34, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
- Looking at the original source, I actually think you should put something like "The human male Maximillian Veers earned the rank of general by fighting with cunning and courage in the battle, along with conflicts on several other worlds". Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:35, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
- How bout now? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:22, May 18, 2018 (UTC)
- Looking at the original source, I actually think you should put something like "The human male Maximillian Veers earned the rank of general by fighting with cunning and courage in the battle, along with conflicts on several other worlds". Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:35, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
- Better? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:34, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
Comments
- I chose not to include an infobox as Zaloriis isn't clearly defined as a planet in the source material, and the location infobox by itself doesn't have any appropriate fields. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:46, May 6, 2018 (UTC)