Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Zalorian rock-lion

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Zalorian rock-lion

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:11, July 3, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Probably the most sources I've had to use for a single article. Thanks to DarthRuiz30 for providing the Imperial Commando information.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 06:15, July 5, 2018 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 13:51, July 7, 2018 (UTC)
3. --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 19:55, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:29, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Object

£T0m.my

• Mountain/Legends is infobox exclusive.
  • Breaking up compound subjects into multiple links is discouraged. Could you fit it in somewhere else? Tommy Macaroni
    • I should have known better. It's a bit clunky but it's there now, couldn't think of a better way. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:04, July 5, 2018 (UTC)
• Can we get a bit of a more precise date? Presumably that was after Order 66? Tommy Macaroni 17:57, July 3, 2018 (UTC)
  • Hope those are both enough. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:56, July 4, 2018 (UTC)
    • Can 19 BBY be found in the book itself? Tommy Macaroni 15:15, July 4, 2018 (UTC)
      • Based on other articles based on that book, no, so I've grabbed a source. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:04, July 5, 2018 (UTC)

Imperators at the gate

• I believe the article should be located at "Zalorian rock-lion" per our Naming policy. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Sounds good. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:23, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
• Please reword the introductory sentence so that the subject is presented in singular. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Had a go at it, hope that works. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:23, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
• Why do you list Kina Ha's species if you don't do that for Tur-Mukan? Imperators II^(Talk) 15:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Because Humans aren't special. Removed the Kaminoan inclusion as it's not relevant. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:23, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
• Currently ref 5 doesn't indicate how 501st is connected to Tur-Mukan's death. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Took the easy way out and just moved the sentence so the reference it only covers the year. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:23, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
• Please mention in the BTS which source provided the subject's full name. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:23, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

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