Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Zalor Minister (second nomination)

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Contents

  • 1 Zalor Minister
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.2 Immi Thrax
        • 1.1.2.3 OOM
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Zalor Minister

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:07, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restoring this old one

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:24, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 23:42, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 13:29, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
  4. Objection handled via Discord. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 01:37, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
  5. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 03:58, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • "Zalorian minster" in body, but "Zalorian Minister" elsewhere. Which one is correct? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:09, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:12, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I initially thought you were calling out the spelling mistake lol. The Prima guide uses the lower case version. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:14, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
Immi Thrax
  • I'm unfamiliar with the source material so I don't know if this is written out or just audio, but about the quote: "I'm here Darth." That should be punctuated "I'm here, Darth." unless the source failed to punctuate it. Immi Thrax (talk) 09:18, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Good catch. One thing I can always be trusted to overlook is quote punctuation. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:41, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
OOM

(Reviewing note) Informal names shouldn't be bolded in the intro. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 13:29, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

  • I had included it because a majority of references to the character Transe Decar in the game use it, for example his in-game model is titled "Minister Transe Decar", but fair enough. 114.75.46.31 16:00, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Just to be clear that was me writing above. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 16:04, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I figured :P Sorry about my review note, I should have added that partial names shouldn't be bolded in the intro either, since it's unnecessary and only creates clutter. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 16:27, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:52, 16 April 2021 (UTC)