Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yresilini

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Yresilini

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:28, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another creature nom

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 12:37, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:13, July 30, 2018 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:26, August 2, 2018 (UTC)

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Tommy

• Could we get a relevant image in there? Maybe of Tann?
  • Done.
• "Tann received high marks from her professor and continued on a military career, her taming of the Yresilini was later recounted by soliders under her command.[1]" The latter part of the sentence seems a bit off, could you modify it please? Tommy Macaroni 13:27, July 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • Modified, might not be enough. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:27, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
    • I've changed it slightly to get rid of the double "and". Tommy Macaroni 12:37, July 19, 2018 (UTC)

Imp

• Context for the Chiss needed. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:08, July 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:05, July 30, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• In your date ref you use the logic that Tann had left Chiss space by 22 BBY, but there's no mention in the body of Chiss Space. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, August 1, 2018 (UTC)
  • Changed to the Unknown Regions, which is just as accurate.
• Does the general she selected not deserve his own article? He seems fairly significant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, August 1, 2018 (UTC)
  • Wasn't sure if it would be necessary so I figured I would wait until someone suggested an article. Created one for both Yresilini. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:58, August 2, 2018 (UTC)

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