Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yorr

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Yorr

• Nominated by: Matt Seay (talk) 00:37, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

1. Looks good. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 00:39, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo

• No sourcing in the intro.
  • Taken care of. Matt Seay (talk) 01:39, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
• The intro and bio are far from complete.
• Needs a more comprehensive behind the scenes.
• I know for a fact this does not include every source/adaptation that has Yorr. He also appeared in the novel, and, from seeing the sourcing of his image, was at least pictured (possibly more info too) in Star Wars: Behind the Magic and Rebellion Era Sourcebook. And he certainly has appeared in more than just those as well. Potentially other sources and adaptations also have more info than what's already on here.
• And finally, if this article were to be complete, it would be at least good article length (250 or more words), possibly even a featured article (1000 or more words). Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:42, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
  • A note regarding this edit: Sources should never be added to the Sources section based on guesswork. They should be checked to see if Yorr is indeed mentioned (and if there's any new info). Menkooroo (talk) 01:09, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

1. Das Rubedo (edit conflict)
   • Intros are not to be sourced.
     • Taken Care of. Matt Seay (talk)
   • "Imperial Career" is not a section from the Layout Guide.
     • Taken care of. Matt Seay (talk) 01:39, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
   • You can have an introduction if you want to, but on such a short article, it's usually better to just have it as one section. Click any old Comprehensive Article. If you want to keep the intro, that he was part of Imperial Demonstration Team is only in the intro and that he fought at Endor should be in it.
   • That Rexler Brath bit is unsourced.
   • Was Imperial Demonstration Team mentioned in Vehicle Essential Guide? Your intro sourcing says so. I wrote the IDT article, so I may need to update if that's the case.
   • You can see his eye color and that he had fair skin in the picture.
     • Taken care of. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 01:32, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
   • Vader, the IDT, the TIEs, the Death Star, Onyx Squadron, and Rexler Brath all need context. That's a blurb that lets the reader know basically what the thing is, e.g. "The Death Star, an Imperial superweapon."
   • That's all for now. NaruHina ^Talk 00:52, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
2. Hey now
   • Even without the intro, the article's now 265 words long. It's too long to be a CA and will need to go the GAN page. Just give me the go-ahead and I'll archive it and remove it from this page for you. However, since the article seems to be incomplete, I recommend taking some time to finish it before bringing it to the GAN page. Anyway, let me know if you want me to remove it from here. Menkooroo (talk) 02:49, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

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