Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yolthani VI

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Yolthani VI

Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 01:36, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 18:13, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 127 words (0 introduction, 102 body, 25 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:COMICS

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I'd suggest bringing up the hyropodic aetherbeast earlier in the article's text, so that you have a portion of the body talking about what Yolthani VI was and what it was like from the natural sciences aspect, and then follow up with historical info. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:40, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
- Added aetherbeast. There's no other information for natural sciences and historical info. Chipchip88 (talk) 15:01, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
  - The bit about the biomes would also be more relevant there, and correspondingly the context about Yolthani VI in the "history" portion of the body can be simplified. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:21, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
    - Added biomes, not sure how to simplify the Yolthani VI in the history portion. Chipchip88 (talk) 17:00, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

~~The comic doesn't mention that the biomes are distinct~~ Lewisr (talk) 23:57, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
- Removed Chipchip88 (talk) 00:07, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
~~The release date for the comic isn't mentioned in the article cited, also will need updating on Polysatyr~~ Lewisr (talk) 18:19, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- Changed source Chipchip88 (talk) 01:11, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
  - Here is a source for the full date, cite it with Template:Marvel. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:00, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
    - Thank you! Added source Chipchip88 (talk) 15:32, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:12, 21 November 2023 (UTC)