Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yavin Convention

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Yavin Convention

Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:12, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: More than likely held in the aftermath of the Jedi-Sith War

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Objection resolved via discord. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:00, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
Looks great! ImpacticForce (Talk) 20:03, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:57, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
VergenceScatter (talk) 04:54, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
Fan26 (talk) 18:31, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:43, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

Looking at the dialogue, I feel that you cannot determine whether Kenobi's claim is just a made-up thing for the distraction or not. Therefore, I suggest writing this as if it's according to something, for example "The Yavin Convention was a alleged conference" , "at which the Yavin Code was apparently established" and "According to Kenobi the Code stated that,". This objection applies to the Yavin Code as well. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 19:50, 31 December 2020 (UTC)

~~"Mission" needs more context.~~
- Does "mission to Utapau" suffice, or do you want me to go more into the nature of the mission (traveling there after the death of a Jedi and then trying to secure a giant kyber crystal)?
  - No, it's fine; that will do.
~~The quote also needs context regarding the droid as well as the circumstances of the dialogue.~~ - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 18:13, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
- Added context, although I feel it's rather wordy now. Not sure if there's a better way to phrase it, or if it's possible to outright remove some of it. DwartiiDelver (talk) 18:51, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
  - Yeah, that's a bit too much. I've reworded it as well as a part of the article body. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 19:04, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
    - That's definitely much better. Thanks!
      - No problem! OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:57, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
I don't see a need for mentioning the Aionomica scandal in the infobox since the two events are not established to be related. Other event CAs don't list anything in the prev or next field even if it could be deduced that the subject took place prior or subsequent to another event. This article should list the Clone Wars event instead. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 19:11, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
- Ah, I see. Removed and replaced. DwartiiDelver (talk) 19:23, 2 January 2021 (UTC)

~~Kenobi was not captured by battle droids, he was captured by Grievous. It would be more accurate to say he was being held by them.~~
- Adjusted accordingly.
~~You can note those were OOM-series security droids to be more specific about the model~~--Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:15, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
- Linked to the OOM security droid page. DwartiiDelver (talk) 21:30, 2 January 2021 (UTC)

~~Even though there's nothing implying a direct connection, it's worth it for the body to note that the convention shared its name with the gas giant Yavin Prime.~~ Fan26 (Talk) 15:50, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
- Noted. DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:44, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
  - Please identify it as being in the Outer Rim. Fan26 (talk) 15:02, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
    - Done. DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:24, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
      - I've thought it over and Yavin's location wasn't neccesary. I've gone ahead and undone it. Fan26 (talk) 18:31, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:43, 13 January 2021 (UTC)