Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Wrath (Assertor-class)

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Wrath (Assertor-class)

• Nominated by: Loqiical (talk) 10:24, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: e
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFG

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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:17, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
2. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:19, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
3. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:14, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 02:50, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
5. Good work. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• Please include full names for both the ISD I and II.
  • Loqiical (talk) 06:52, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
• Not important to include the fact that the name of the Assertor-class itself was introduced in Legends. It's also of typical practice to include the actual name of the subject when mentioning anything regarding its first Legends introduction, i.e. "The Wrath."
  • Loqiical (talk) 06:52, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
• The Essential Guide to Warfare is a mention not an appearance. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 04:02, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Loqiical (talk) 06:52, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

Luca

• Galactic Civil War is infobox exclusive. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:46, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
  • A mention of the Galactic Civil has been added to the main body. Also, I believe that my original meaning used "Some time after" to mean "an unspecified period of time after" whereas "Sometime after" appears to mean "at a certain point in time after". Can I just clarify that you intend on this change? Thanks. Loqiical (talk) 05:01, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that's the point. The Wrath "was deployed in a large battle group" at some point after the Battle of Yavin. "Some time" implies continued time, which I don't think is correct in this sentence. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:37, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
      • I believe both are correct, but each has a slightly different meaning. Loqiical (talk) 10:06, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
        • Fair, feel free to change it back if you want then. :) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:19, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
          • I just changed the wording a bit to clarify. Loqiical (talk) 10:21, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
• While I understand that the last sentence is important information, I think it would be more suitable in the Wrath battle group article and not in the Wrath article. It could be reworded to something like: "The fleet was believed to have included dozens of other ships, including smaller ships, cruiser-sized vessels, and many support ships."LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:37, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Ok. Loqiical (talk) 10:09, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

Fan

• "At some point after the Alliance to Restore the Republic destroyed the Death Star in that battle" I don't think this context for the Battle of Yavin is relevant to the Wrath.
  • Ok. Loqiical (talk) 23:02, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
• "The fleet was believed to have included dozens of other ships." This feels awkward and irrevelant to the article when its oprhaned on its own. Maybe integrate it into the preceding sentence? Fan26 (Talk) 15:30, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Ok. Loqiical (talk) 23:02, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)