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Wookiee honor code
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Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 14:11, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
You might want to link the Battle of Starkiller Base somewhere, but I'll leave it up to you. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, January 8, 2018 (UTC)- JangFett (Talk) 20:15, January 11, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators Wookiee code it is, then. Imperators II(Talk) 21:42, January 11, 2018 (UTC)
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Ayrehead
You'll need to expand the date reference, as Galactic Atlas doesn't specifically state that Chewbacca kills that stormtrooper in that year.Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:33, December 28, 2017 (UTC)- Done
- I'd change the date to say the events of the novelization rather than the film. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:34, January 1, 2018 (UTC)
- Done
Could you add a date for the book release in the BTS.Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:33, December 28, 2017 (UTC)I've added a redlink you'll need to fill.Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:34, January 1, 2018 (UTC)- Done.
Context for Han Solo, preferably his relation to Chewie, is needed. You also don't actually state that Kylo Ren is affiliated with the First Order, which is necessary for the last sentence to make sense.Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:34, January 1, 2018 (UTC)
Jangeth
"A similar rule of honor existed in Star Wars Legends, and Wookiees who broke it were exiled and referred to as "madclaws." This sentence stood out to me only because neither clause connects with one and another. I recommend you mention where it existed in Legends and, more importantly, the significance of it. Since you claim they are similar, you'll need to go more into detail. JangFett (Talk) 14:22, January 6, 2018 (UTC)- Done. - Cwedin(talk) 23:01, January 7, 2018 (UTC)
- Naming the game would be a lot better than saying "In Star Wars legends," don't you think? JangFett (Talk) 00:06, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
- I'm not sure. The concept of madclaws/dishonored Wookiees is explored in several Legends sources, so I think naming one specific instance would be odd. The KOTOR ref could be swapped out with a few different things. - Cwedin(talk) 01:17, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
- I didn't realize that there are more than one instance. My mistake. Yet, sourcing it to only KOTOR means that it only occurred in KOTOR, if you can see what I mean. Like myself, I wasn't aware and I'm sure other readers might not be aware, so that's why I wanted you to replace "In Star Wars Legends" with KOTOR instead. Seeing that you know these instances, do you think KOTOR is the most notable out of all of them? Or are they all notable? I don't want you to leave out important information. JangFett (Talk) 03:34, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
- I don't know if KOTOR's the most notable, I just chose it because the word "madclaw" is specifically used in the game. I could swap or double-up the KOTOR reference with The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, if you think that would be less misleading. - Cwedin(talk) 04:45, January 11, 2018 (UTC)
- I didn't realize that there are more than one instance. My mistake. Yet, sourcing it to only KOTOR means that it only occurred in KOTOR, if you can see what I mean. Like myself, I wasn't aware and I'm sure other readers might not be aware, so that's why I wanted you to replace "In Star Wars Legends" with KOTOR instead. Seeing that you know these instances, do you think KOTOR is the most notable out of all of them? Or are they all notable? I don't want you to leave out important information. JangFett (Talk) 03:34, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
- I'm not sure. The concept of madclaws/dishonored Wookiees is explored in several Legends sources, so I think naming one specific instance would be odd. The KOTOR ref could be swapped out with a few different things. - Cwedin(talk) 01:17, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
- Naming the game would be a lot better than saying "In Star Wars legends," don't you think? JangFett (Talk) 00:06, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
- Done. - Cwedin(talk) 23:01, January 7, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators honor code? Or Wookiee honor Imperators?
The CSWE reference should specify an entry via {{CSWECite}}.Imperators II(Talk) 20:57, January 11, 2018 (UTC)