Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/White seedcake

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White seedcake

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Support

  1. BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 23:47, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
  2. AxMech (talk) 23:55, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:54, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
  4. Historians have long puzzeled over why our poor musician friend never got his seed-cake :( Fan26 (Talk) 19:18, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:31, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

AxMech
  • The "date" reference needs to be reworded as it is now not clear what you're trying to say in it. Is the story concurrent with the events of ep6 but the mention of the cake happens a few months before it? Is the cake mentioned before the story, somewhere else? If I understand correctly and it's the former, I suggest you change it to "White seed-cake's mention in "And the Band Played On: The Band's Tale" takes place a few months before the story's present time which is concurrent with Star Wars: Episode VI Return of the Jedi, the events of which The New Essential Chronology dates to 4 ABY."
    • As I explained on Discord, the missing "in" was an error, and the story takes place over several months, so the ROTJ-concurrent bit isn't really the present time any more than the earlier section is. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:49, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
  • However, he did not get got neither the dinner nor the white seed-cake he desired that night.AxMech (talk) 23:37, 13 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:34, 21 December 2022 (UTC)