Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Whisperbird

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Whisperbird

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:19, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: now i have a CAN whisperbird and a GAN whisperbird :p
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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:55, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
2. "Crofyp woke up, and he could hear the whisperbirds' whispers while Qilori kept his winglets motionless." 😛 Samonic ^(Talk) 21:32, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:17, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:53, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Is it really specified to be a type of bird?
• No need to specify the Whisperbird is a starship after establishing it's a light cruiser.
• Missing (as a ship) tag on CR's audiobook. Likewise, (as a Tactica piece) should be moved after (in flashback(s)).
• Mention Thrawn's exile plan mentioning the whisperbird, please. Samonic ^(Talk) 13:41, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
• Please specify what language is being spoken in the quote.
• You should mention what sacrifice Ba'kif made. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:15, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
• Senior Captain capitalization is incorrect. Senior Captain should only be capitalized when mentioned like "Senior Captain Thrawn."
• The Legends counterpart is only mentioned in the BTS. Is there a page for that Legends subject? If not, is it notable enough for a page? Samonic ^(Talk) 08:17, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
  • fixed and linked BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:53, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Please add |legends=Whisper bird to the {{top}} template. Samonic ^(Talk) 19:40, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
      • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:39, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
• The "whisper bird" bird you're linking to in the body is a Lambda–class shuttle. The page you're trying to link sits at the Whisper bird title. :) Samonic ^(Talk) 18:11, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:40, 4 October 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• A few issues with the Bts. First, you say that it first appeared in a source where it is mentioned only. Second, you need to not all of a subject's appearances/sources "milestones" in the Bts, so you need to note where it first appeared. Thirdly, there is a legends equivalent which needs to be noted. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:25, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
• Appearances you link to starship for "as a ship" but not in "as a Tactica piece". Whilst inconsistent, I would suggest removing the linking here to align with existing templates, such as Template:Ghost, Template:Holocron and Template:Hologram. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:25, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
• "Chiss species' Unknown Regions nation" implies there are other Chiss nations outside of the Unknown Regions. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:25, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
• you can note the similarity/shared name with the Yavin birds Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:25, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
• I'm on mobile, but you should be able to get an image onto the article with the above. Thrawn is probably the best option, just ensure you tie the subject to the image in the caption. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:25, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
  • all done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:15, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
• I love the image, but as it is a book cover, it can't be used in the IU section of the article and too big to stash it in the BTS for an article this size so you'll need to use a different image. Make sure the image is from the same continuity as well :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:57, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
  • changed from book cover to art BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:35, 29 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:53, 5 October 2022 (UTC)