Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Weeping maya tree

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Weeping maya tree

Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 04:59, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 18:08, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 313 words (31 introduction, 197 body, 85 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 214 words (0 introduction, 150 body, 64 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

(Votes required: Additional 1 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Lewisr (talk) 19:51, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Sanathestarr (talk) 21:32, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 21:02, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
CometSmudge (talk) 19:41, 27 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

ThrawnChiss

~~Release dates of TBB episodes should be included in BtS. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 14:24, 7 May 2024 (UTC)~~
- Good catch, added. Wok142 (talk) 16:36, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
  - The episodes themselves do not support their own release date, but Clone Force 99 Is Back in New Star Wars: The Bad Batch Season 2 Trailer on StarWars.com (backup link) and Watch the Star Wars: The Bad Batch Season 3 Trailer on StarWars.com (backup link) do. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 16:49, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
    - Thank you for providing those, should be good now. Wok142 (talk) 16:55, 7 May 2024 (UTC)

Lew

~~The reference to the concept art gallery should link to the specific section of the episode guide, if you look at Mika's tent for reference~~ Lewisr (talk) 03:13, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Added. Wok142 (talk) 03:56, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
  - Should link to the concept gallery as well in it as well as the slide number Lewisr (talk) 18:00, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
    - Think I got it now. Wok142 (talk) 18:42, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Would be worth looking at the other episodes sources to see if the tree is pictured/referenced, I noticed it was in the Pabu episode concept art gallery for example (which also should be noted and pipelinked in the BTS if you look at Mika's tent above again) Lewisr (talk) 03:13, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- I have checked several other episode guides/declassifieds and didn't find anything. Isn't the concept art gallery that you linked above just part of the episode guide? Wok142 (talk) 03:56, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
  - Did another sweep through to be safe and maybe it is in the declassified in #3, behind Omega? What do you think? Same picture is also used in the episode guide. Wok142 (talk) 04:08, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
    - Sorry I missed that the first guide linked was the Pabu one. Regarding the one from The Return, I'm really not confident myself on saying it is, so I'll leave it to your choice Lewisr (talk) 18:00, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
      - I'll see if anyone on Discord has opinions. Wok142 (talk) 18:42, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
        Several agreed that it should be listed. I've added it. Wok142 (talk) 18:54, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
~~The episode numbers for the 2 episodes mentioned should be included~~ Lewisr (talk) 18:02, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Added! Wok142 (talk) 18:42, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
~~Pabu isn't referred to as a planet in the Harbinger episode so that should be cited to another source that does call it one, perhaps the Pabu episode?~~ Lewisr (talk) 17:16, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Went for what the Pabu page itself used, the Databank. Wok142 (talk) 17:37, 9 May 2024 (UTC)

Imp

~~Let's see a Mediacat.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 08:23, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- Done! Wok142 (talk) 16:47, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Since currently the dating ref does not make an explicit connection to the relevant episode anyway, please adopt the practice used on this article. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:42, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Cool, copied what was there. Wok142 (talk) 17:40, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Comet

~~Pabu should be in the "found on" field in the infoxbox, not the homeworld. (Unless it was mentioned somewhere that its native to Pabu, in which case you should specify that in the article)~~

~~I think changing the second sentence to something like "in the center of the colonnade of the/in front of the Pabu Archium" would be better~~ CometSmudge (talk) 18:53, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- Got both. Wok142 (talk) 19:38, 27 May 2024 (UTC)

Dani

There are a few scenes the team spends specifically sitting under the tree (Finale scene comes to mind). I think they're relevant to the subject. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 10:58, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Added two sentences detailing the finale scene. Any other scenes you feel need to be in there? Wok142 (talk) 17:40, 28 May 2024 (UTC)