Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Watoru

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Watoru

• Nominated by: Stake black ^msg 21:21, 25 September 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 16:56, 27 September 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 383 words (76 introduction, 275 body, 32 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 141 words (0 introduction, 126 body, 15 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:AST, WP:NOVELS

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Comet

• The BTS info about the name on Engai system would also apply here
• A quote could be added
• I think it would be worth mentioning that it was autumn in Hanrai's territory and that the Reverent' was Hanrai's flagship to explain the connection
• Overall, I think a little more detail can be added. Yuehiro's arrival four years earlier/his dorm change are events that occurred on Watoru, and Kyuu and Masamu are presumably residents (or are at least present there) and should be mentioned. The seal Hanrai gives Yuehiro, the courtyard/study/dorms, and Hanrai's clan are all things that can be mentioned. CometSmudge (talk) 20:02, 26 September 2025 (UTC)
  • I addressed the issues above. Stake black ^msg 01:36, 27 September 2025 (UTC)
    • I would just make it clear that the conversation is happening later in Hanrai's study, since it currently reads as if it's in the library, and I think you should very briefly mention Masamu's conversation too. CometSmudge (talk) 02:24, 27 September 2025 (UTC)
      • Tweaked it a bit. Stake black ^msg 02:45, 27 September 2025 (UTC)

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