- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Viv Tanner
- Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 15:10, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:PRIDE
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Support
- Yay for seeing another real person article in the CAN, and of course, yay for a WP:PRIDE to support :) Immi Thrax
(talk) 15:25, 25 September 2021 (UTC) - YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
(talk) 18:03, 28 September 2021 (UTC) - I think it's good! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:40, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
Object
Vergence
Please add a Youmay for Viv.VergenceScatter (talk) 15:24, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
Immi Thrax
Please include a page quote related to their work on the book—doesn't have to be from a Lucasfilm source :)I spotted a couple of duplicate links to unlink. Do you have "Highlight duplicate links" enabled? If not, we have some instructions in Discord that can be searched for, super helpful tool.Immi Thrax (talk) 09:27, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
There's a bumping happening with the Qi'ra image and the Published works header. See what option you like for de-bumping it (change size, change alignment, position higher...)Immi Thrax
(talk) 15:15, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
"Swiss artist and animator" can this be updated to illustrator and animator? Artist is too broad a term to use here I think, and both illustration and animation are specific forms of art. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Can we get the publisher for the book? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)"Depicts Holdo's adolescence" Should this be "Holdo in her adolescence" or something similar? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Tanner noted her pleasure at illustrating Kryze, was this the only character they called out? Might be worth mentioning. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Can you note somewhere that Holdo was the only illustrated character to feature in the saga films? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Facebook page isn't in the article? And is it worth linking their patreon? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Check the wordcount as it may tip over to a GA... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:32, 9 October 2021 (UTC)- Artist vs. illustrator: Fixed.
- The article for Jenny Parks, another illustrator for Women of the Galaxy, passed inspection without mentioning the publisher. I personally do not think the information is necessary.
- Adjusted Holdo sentence.
- Clarified Tanner's comments on Kryze.
- I personally don't think "only illustrated character to feature in the saga films" is necessary information. Feels a bit like trivia.
- Facebook external link added. Great find, thank you!
- I personally do not feel we should link the Patreon. There is no precedent for us doing so nor is there a citation template for it.
- The word count is still at 249. Whew!
- Please let me know what you think! Dentface (talk) 06:04, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
- Preliminary objection: this intro is too short for the article size at just one sentence. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:40, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
- Split up into two sentences per discussion on Discord. Dentface (talk) 04:04, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
- You may have missed this on Discord, but adding more context than just "characters" for each individual would beef up the intro nicely. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:25, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
- Split up into two sentences per discussion on Discord. Dentface (talk) 04:04, 11 October 2021 (UTC)