Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Visara

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Contents

  • 1 Visara
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lee's charge
        • 1.1.2.2 Ayrehead
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Visara

  • Nominated by: grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 14:16, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:03, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:46, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 19:50, April 24, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:28, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 20:44, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Can we source the date to the book?
    • The date is sourced to the book itself as it mentions the Battle of Yavin as two years ago, i.e. "one thing she had learned in the two years since the Battle of Yavin".
      • I'm fine with the sourcing, but I'm not sure if Yavin being in 0 needs another source. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:03, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • It would be nice to give context about the Galactic Civil War, like it was fought between Rebels and Empire.
    • Done.
  • A little bit context for Arnot Station please.
    • Done.
  • Nice to see a CAN from you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:37, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:20, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you clarify that Organa wasn't on the Gamble when the Imperial captured it before saying he tried to lure her back? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Reworded a bit, take a look. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:00, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments