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Virgillian Council
- Nominated by: Dropbearemma (she/her) 04:48, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This one gets a single sentence on p. 112 and an indirect mention on p. 38 of The Truce at Bakura Sourcebook, which I just accidentally called The Truce At Virgillia Sourcebook. Alas, it is not.
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- Erebus Chronus (Talk) 18:12, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- Nice job. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 19:12, 10 April 2022 (UTC) - Per above.— Samonic
10:41, 11 April 2022 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 03:31, 18 April 2022 (UTC)- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:31, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
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Amazingly
Please add a {{1stm}} tag.Context for the Virgillian Free Alignment and Aristocracy."bulk cruisers" can be piplinked to bulk cruiser.AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:40, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- Oops I did these and then forgot to say so. How's that? Dropbearemma (she/her) 08:20, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Looks good. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:42, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- Looks good. AmazinglyCool
- Oops I did these and then forgot to say so. How's that? Dropbearemma (she/her) 08:20, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
"The Truce at Bakura Sourcebook establishes that the Virgillian Council was formed shortly before the Battle of Endor, which The New Essential Chronology dates to 4 ABY," does the source state that it was formed directly before the Battle of Endor or just before. If the answer if the latter you should fix the introduction, body, and date ref to state that it was formed before 4 ABY instead of in 4 ABY.Is the "Virgillian Civil War" entry in Volume II or III of TCSWE. Our page for the book seems to suggest that it is in volume III.The Complete Encyclopedia source should have a {{Imo}} tag.AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:06, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- The CSWE thing was a typo, thank you for catching it! The council is formed... shortly before? It says that the newly-formed council "immediately" offered the Alliance the fleet. Since the Battle of Endor is 39:3, that does introduce ambiguity, so I've put a c. in there to reflect that. Does that work? Dropbearemma (she/her) 13:26, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- Everything looks great now! Although it says "immediately," I still think the circa is safer. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:12, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- Everything looks great now! Although it says "immediately," I still think the circa is safer. AmazinglyCool
- The CSWE thing was a typo, thank you for catching it! The council is formed... shortly before? It says that the newly-formed council "immediately" offered the Alliance the fleet. Since the Battle of Endor is 39:3, that does introduce ambiguity, so I've put a c. in there to reflect that. Does that work? Dropbearemma (she/her) 13:26, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
Erebus
For the second mention of the Battle of Endor, you should provide context for Endor/Legends and possibly try and reword it from "Battle of Endor" to something around "the battle on the Endor moon".Erebus Chronus (Talk) 23:38, 21 March 2022 (UTC)- Oops I did these and then forgot to say so. How's that? Dropbearemma (she/her) 08:20, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
You have unsourced information in the body.UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:37, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Oops! I think I've fixed it? Dropbearemma (she/her) 10:20, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
"It was part of the truce established between the Virgillian Free Alignment and the Aristocracy", should this be saying that it's formation or something? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:59, 18 April 2022 (UTC)- Done! Dropbearemma (she/her) 08:15, 18 April 2022 (UTC)