Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Viper Sensor Intelligence Systems

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Viper Sensor Intelligence Systems

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:20, March 25, 2017 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I've always loved those old HoloNet articles. (Featuring another awesome Vector by Brules!)

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Imperators II

• 233 words - needs intro.
  • That puts it over, but whatever. Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:19, March 25, 2017 (UTC)
• Hpaq is infobox-exclusive.
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:19, March 25, 2017 (UTC)
• "the company's biggest success to date" - "to date" needs to be specified, since we write in the past tense.
  • This is from The New Essential Guide to Droids, so we don't really have a chronological context for this statement.
• I feel that the BTS would benefit from a bit of context for HoloNet News Vol. 531 50. Imperators II^(Talk) 06:37, March 25, 2017 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:19, March 25, 2017 (UTC)

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