Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Viella Zall

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Viella Zall

• Nominated by: Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 19:56, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:21, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
2. Good work. Looking forward to more nominations from you! OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:22, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:52, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:41, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
5. Immi Thrax (talk) 09:01, 8 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• It isn't necessary to mention the lack of species or gender in the Bts. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:12, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
  • yeeted Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 01:13, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
• Please implement {{CSWECite}}. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:05, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. Felt like I was missing something Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 04:35, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• (Review note; see this) Italics should be placed inside the formatted parameter when pipelinking.
• Good work overall, but there's a few issues that need addressing:
  • A date can be provided using {{TOR_updates}}
  • The Codex entry says Reid began constructing replicas of Zall after twelve years of isolation. Currently, the article is worded in a way that makes it seem as though Reid spent twelve years on the Zall clones.
  • The source does not mention "galactic communications grid" so that will need to be backed up by another source. Same goes for the fact that Tatooine was a planet.
  • The article should reflect the fact that the source says "local wildlife." OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:46, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Noted the linking, thanks. Addressed the rest as well. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 18:55, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• Would Category:Performing artists be appropriate? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:11, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
  • I have been informed that's already covered as a subcategory of Musicians. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:21, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• It's not immediately clear from the dating ref note how Chapters 9-16 of KOTFE relate to Update 4.3. You need to connect those two. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:04, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
  • That part of the dating ref actually comes preloaded with Template:TOR_updates. Wouldn't this be a better conversation to have on the template talk page concerning the clarity of all TOR articles that use dating refs as opposed to Viella Zall specifically? Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 17:16, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I've expanded on the relevant portion of TOR_updates so it should be fine now. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 17:35, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks, OOM Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 03:49, 7 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:24, 8 April 2021 (UTC)