Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Victor Starspeeder's grandfather

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Victor Starspeeder's grandfather

Nominated by: D MCCG (chat) 01:13, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: First CAN

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Great work for your first nom, I anticipate the nomination pages being filled with Jedi Academy content! :P JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:36, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
Impressive date note. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:58, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
All hail the 60th dating citation template OOM 224 08:37, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

~~Since there's only one appearance for this subject, you can remove "first" from the BTS.~~ Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:31, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
- Done. ~ D MCCG (chat) 00:42, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
  - Per rule #3 under How to review: "Objections should then be addressed by the nominator. Once the objector is satisfied, they should strike their objection. The nominator should not strike reviewers' objections for them." Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:46, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
    - Ah sorry about that, new to this thing. ~ D MCCG (chat) 00:50, 16 August 2021 (UTC)

Luca

~~In the first reference you say: "In which Yoda is 700 years old", if it is the book itself that states it, you should probably make that explicit.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:11, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
- Done ~ D MCCG (chat) 11:50, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
~~In the BTS, you say non-canon and you link Canon, as the continuity. Since the article is in the Legends continuity, you should hyperlink Legends and not Canon.~~LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:27, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry to interject, but the page for canon isn't just about the new continuity but rather the concept of canon as a whole. The link is fine as it is right now. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:19, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
  - I agree with Macaroni on this one. ~ D MCCG (chat) 21:44, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
    - Where’s my head sometimes? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:21, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

Welcome to the CAN! ~~First off, I think that a Starspeeder family page can be created and linked in the body and affiliations of the infobox.~~
- Thanks for the welcoming, I made the page for it and linked it in the affiliations. ~ D MCCG (chat) 00:25, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  - That should somehow be mentioned in the body as well; and is it conjectural, or is that name used?
    - Fixed the body to fit in the Starspeeder family. It is conjectural, added it.
~~"Human" should always be capitalized when writing Legends articles.~~
- Done. ~ D MCCG (chat) 00:23, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
~~Your current date note is a little confusing to me, but I don't know if it makes sense to discuss it on this page. Would you mind joining our Discord to go over it there?~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:00, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry, Discord doesn't work on my computer and my phone is basically broken. Maybe we can discuss the date note on my talk page or right here. ~ D MCCG (chat) 00:22, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  - Fair enough, I'l try to hash it out here: I think I get lost when you mention the tournament; you should establish which source states that the tournament takes place 150 years prior as well as what those 150 years prior are prior to. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:19, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
    - I sourced which source says the tournament takes place 150 years prior. Don't know what you mean by 150 years prior are prior to, so I just made the Date Note a little less confusing. ~ D MCCG (chat) 12:30, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
      - Alright, that made it clearer, thanks. I've given it a copy-edit, please let me know if it's still accurate. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:30, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
        Thanks for the copy-edit, looks good to me. Thanks ~ D MCCG (chat) 22:26, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
        
        No problem.
Where is this guy mentioned? If it's in passing, is there no quote? Also, it's been a while since I read these books--they're partly the journals of the students, no? If that's the case and the grandfather is mentioned in one of the journals, that needs to be mentioned. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:32, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
- He's mentioned in Victor's journal so I added it. One question, in the quote, should grandpa be italicized since the article is about him or not. ~ D MCCG (chat) 23:22, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  - I'm not sure what you mean. If the book italicizes it then yes, the quote should reflect that. The article body should also explain that Victor compared the grandpa to Yoda in the journal. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:50, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
    - Ok. It's explained already in the body. ~ D MCCG (chat) 11:42, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
      - I'm asking you to specifically mention the journal in the body. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:14, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
        Ohh ok, fixed. Sorry for the misunderstanding. ~ D MCCG (chat) 03:20, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
        
        No worries, it's all good!
~~I've added a redlink for you to fill in.~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:38, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
~~Bts should also mention that Krozoczka was the illustrator.~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:04, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- Done and done. ~ D MCCG (chat) 12:45, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

I haven't read this new series, but from what I remember from the original one, these sketches were made by the IU author of the journals, which would be Victor Starspeeder in this case. If that is correct, then it should be noted that he included a sketch of his grandfather in his journal. OOM 224 20:42, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
- I stated that he drew his grandpa in article. ~ D MCCG (chat) 23:03, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:37, 28 August 2021 (UTC)