Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Verre Sydia's husband

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Verre Sydia's husband

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 16:46, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part 2

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:13, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
2. This reminds me of the time I waged war against the CAN page with TEA.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:27, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
3. Ah, memories. NaruHina ^Talk 09:51, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:29, September 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. 501
   • Could you add earlier that Shafu was a former slaver? 501st dogma^(talk) 23:34, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done.
   • Add that he is male in the body. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:46, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
     • Calling him a "man" is good enough, I believe. Cade Calrayn 00:06, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
2. Rubedo
   • Calling Zallow "fallen" has undue Dark Jedi connotations.
     • Fair point.
   • I was confused as to whom the Rodian is. NaruHina ^Talk 06:43, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
     • Blarg. Cade Calrayn 14:18, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi
   • It's 200 words, you're probably going to need to write an intro.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:54, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
     • Not anymore, I believe.
   • You're going to need to source the years to something besides the game.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:59, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 17:06, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
   • I believe that the Strtegic Infomration Service needs a little context.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:49, September 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 22:25, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

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