Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vennerson's daughter

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Vennerson's daughter

• Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:06, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 04:08, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 110 words (0 introduction, 68 body, 42 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:01, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
2. Sanathestarr (talk) 19:57, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 23:20, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 04:07, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Sana

• The first sentence is a bit confusing, is the intent "she's in year 1 of Reena University?" If so, is there a way to maybe make that more clear? Sanathestarr (talk) 18:02, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Rephrased. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:34, 5 February 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• I think the first couple sentences should be reworded entirely so you're only uing the date once (in the 2nd sentence preferably to then note she was in her first year at the uni) Lewisr (talk) 04:08, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Reworded. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:07, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:07, 16 February 2024 (UTC)