Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Venix

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Venix

  • Nominated by:
    Jorrel FraajicWookieepedian
    Apr 8, 201409:17:59 UTC
  • Nomination comments: How do you write an article on a ship whose entire known history is the name's use as a disguise?

(5 ECs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:10, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote I'm astounded by the amount of context you crammed into that first sentence. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:44, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
  3. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 01:22, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Not sure the paragraph split is necessary, but otherwise well done! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:07, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 22:59, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:52, April 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • You need a "1st" tag.
    • Done.
  • Something is wrong with the quote.
    • If you mean the quotes, it's that way in the source. Looks terrible, I know. Am I allowed to delete it?
    • Nevermind. Found and fixed.
      Jorrel FraajicWookieepedian
      Apr 8, 201409:53:16 UTC
  • Can we source 3 ABY to the game?
    • We can source the Battle of Hoth, but I've added clarification for the 3 ABY part.
  • NOTOC?
    • Forgot that was a thing, or I'd have used it. Fixed.
  • Release date for X-wing in the BtS? Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:41, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • "...Antan Azzameen, co-owner of rival company Twin Suns Transport Services..." Picky, but please say that Twin Suns was the rival of Viraxo. Because of the paragraph split, and the talk about Hoth, its not exactly clear at the moment.
    • Attempted clarification and relinked some of the body to adequately match this clarification.
  • You talk about a raid at Denbo. Is there an article for that? If not, please create one.
    • There wasn't. There is now.
  • Also, please do not link to something in the quote atrtibtuion if you already have it linked in the body. Viraxo industries and Ace should not be linked. 501st dogma(talk) 12:29, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
    • Though nothing in the MOS specifically forbids linking in quote attributions, I was going off of the "old" unwritten rule, which I see has been largely replaced. As such, I've removed the linking. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 04:56, April 19, 2014 (UTC)
    • You can keep the link to the droid if you wish, as it is not linked to in the body.
  • Its 205 words now. :P That means you need an intro, preferably a short one that doesn't take it over the 250 limit. 501st dogma(talk) 23:35, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
    • Intro added and BTS reworded to keep the article from repeating itself so much. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 03:44, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • "... in a Raid on Viraxo 54 on a Viraxo platform." I believe you are missing a pipelink her on the raid link. :P
    • It took me like 5 times to read that over to see what you meant. Wow. Fixed. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 21:07, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, please note in the future that when pipelinking, always capitalize the first word: i.e [[Water/Legends|cloud]]. I caught a few on this article. 501st dogma(talk) 20:54, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
    • Didn't know, has been noted. Thanks! JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 21:07, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Bro, check your BTS. Italicize those ship names. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:32, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Shoulda checked myself before I wrecked myself, bro. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 09:51, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  1. It's probably worth it to populate a "Viraxo starships" category. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:44, April 13, 2014 (UTC)