Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Veiled Sorority

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Veiled Sorority

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 01:23, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CRIME
  • Date Archived: 15:01, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 232 words (0 introduction, 161 body, 71 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES

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Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:52, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 18:33, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:01, 12 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • It appears the page will need an update per this X-Wing Miniatures pack, also on Wilsa Teshlo Lewisr (talk) 10:25, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Would it be worth adding allegedly to the infobox for the leader field? Currently you could argue it's being presented as fact compared with the body Lewisr (talk) 18:12, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Resolved via discord Lewisr (talk) 18:33, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • Unless I'm missing a second mention of her, I don't think TROS VD states that Teshlo participated in the Battle of Exegol.
    • Fixed.
  • Could you please format the X-Wing card per the instructions on the template page.
    • Isn't it currently being used right? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:02, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
      • The "Cardname formatting" subsection has some extra instructions, but I've fixed it myself. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:40, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Also, that card refers to Teshlo as a Veiled Sorority "privateer." TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:10, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • The text on that X-Wing Miniatures Wiki page is actually an excerpt from the Wook article for Wilsa Teshlo, only what appears on the card itself is present in the source. Please revise the citations accordingly. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:40, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Is that all of them? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:20, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
      • The card doesn't mention the bit about First Order haulers, but I think I got it in my copy-edit. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:05, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:01, 12 September 2023 (UTC)