Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vecari tree

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Contents

  • 1 Vecari tree
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Ayrehead
        • 1.1.2.2 Chosen Tree
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Vecari tree

  • Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 02:07, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:THR, WP:ENT

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

(Votes required: No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)

Support

  1. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:51, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:53, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 12:50, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:15, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:01, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • Since the The Life Day Cookbook is an in-universe book you'll need to cover the mention in it in the article. See something like hypersonic oven as an example of how its normally be done, and be sure to include the fact that Tuggs says they used to do that, implying the practice had stopped by the time it was published. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:45, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. Thanks! Dentface (talk) 22:44, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
Chosen Tree
  • Please rework your paragraphs so you don't have a small one and a huge one. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 16:33, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. Dentface (talk) 04:28, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Review note: avoid the passive voice ("it was mentioned" --> "the chef mentioned") JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:15, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:01, 25 August 2022 (UTC)