Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Vassal Four (Whetstone)

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Vassal Four (Whetstone)

• Nominated by: — Samonic 07:54, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tenth? Yes, tenth nomination of the intelligent and… I've run out of adjectives :P Kilji Illumine // 144 words
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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:08, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 03:30, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:35, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
4. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:15, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Please fix the italicization of the […]
  • Missed that; done.— Samonic 17:22, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
• Could you please change some of the forms of the verb "accept" in the second paragraph?
  • Done.— Samonic 17:22, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
• Similarly, the word "transmission" is used three times in two sentences.
  • Changed.— Samonic 17:22, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
• More a question than an objection, but how do we know that he's not the same guy as Vassal Four? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:01, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Not confirmed nor possible due to the Anvil's destruction. Further explanation has been sent via Discord. — Samonic 17:29, 26 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:15, 6 June 2022 (UTC)