Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Usma's Padawan

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Usma's Padawan

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 22:15, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Moar! Moar! MOAR!

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. --LelalMekha (talk) 22:40, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:31, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:09, September 30, 2012 (UTC)
4. Tinwe^(comlink) 10:13, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. 501st
   • Same objections as Usma's. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:08, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 16:10, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • The first sentence of the bio should be written with the article's subject as the subject of the sentences. (i.e. A female was a Jedi... Not: Usma had an apprentice who was a Jedi...)
     • Fixed, I believe.
   • You still refer to Usma as a female in this article.
     • Done.
   • Could you form one paragraph from all the sentences in the bio?
     • Done.
   • You should mention that Praven was a Sith Lord in the bio.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:46, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done.

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