Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unkajo's lair

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Unkajo's lair

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Support

  1. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:05, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 18:20, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 18:23, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 10:27, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 20:31, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:47, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • I'm assuming Hoth being a planet can be sourced straight to Uprising? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:24, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Yes, the game sources Anoat sector, Hoth system and the planet Hoth. Further, the mission requires navigation through screens that highlight these. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:14, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • "an Uprising team lost contact and the Imperials were attacking the camp established by the Rebels". This sentence needs a little more context, what exactly did the uprising team lose contact with and was the camp based on Hoth. Also is the camp notable enough for an article? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:02, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed that up I think. I don't think the camp is notable - several camps were established and the game only mentions that Imperials started attacking one. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:39, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • "Loathe" should be linked since it's exclusive to the quote attribution
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:46, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Since "ice valley" is a generic term, the infobox should specify that it was "An ice valley" OOM 224 12:06, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. The adjective was "icy", is that ok given you mentioned ice? Wasn't sure if "ice" was a typo or intentional. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:46, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Oh, yeah, that's fine. A typo on my part. Apologies if I caused any confusion. OOM 224 20:31, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:47, 27 October 2021 (UTC)