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Unidentified woman (stormtrooper's haunted psyche)
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 21:53, 1 November 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 06:31, 10 November 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 160 words (0 introduction, 124 body, 36 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 117 words (0 introduction, 85 body, 32 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:WOMEN
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CometSmudge (talk) 01:13, 6 November 2025 (UTC)- - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:57, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 23:33, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 06:30, 10 November 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Mor
Should mention and describe her matching tattoo with the trooper.Mor9347
(Talk) 11:26, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- Added. Stake black msg 12:44, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
Comet
Looks like she also has an earring that can be mentionedI could be wrong, but my understanding is that this takes place during the Battle of Endor, which would mean a 4 ABY date could be addedI don't think either character's gender is directly citable to the short itself; you'd need to use subtitles/AD/another source for thatShould the appearances section have some kind of Appears in imagination/hallucination/vision/something else tag?CometSmudge (talk) 16:54, 2 November 2025 (UTC)- Addressed. Stake black msg 21:49, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- The genders will also need to be cited in the body, and you can use Template:Subtitles for that
- Addressed. Stake black msg 21:49, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
There are enough unidentified woman pages that a disambiguation page should be created and linked hereCometSmudge (talk) 22:09, 2 November 2025 (UTC)- Done. Stake black msg 06:52, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
Once you've referenced a character's pronouns, you don't need to reference them again each time you mention their pronouns. Same with other information like gendersI think the Death Star could have contextCometSmudge (talk) 21:14, 4 November 2025 (UTC)- Fixed. Stake black msg 20:57, 5 November 2025 (UTC)
DFaceG
Bouncing off of Comet's earlier objection, BLACK taking place during the Battle of Endor (specifically amidst the DS2's destruction) seems like important context for the circumstances under which the stormtrooper hallucinated the woman. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:41, 3 November 2025 (UTC)- Fixed. Stake black msg 20:57, 5 November 2025 (UTC)
- I would forgo the "known as" and refer to the DS2 by a more
definitiveofficial name. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:33, 8 November 2025 (UTC)- Reworded it. Stake black msg 10:21, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
- I would forgo the "known as" and refer to the DS2 by a more
- Fixed. Stake black msg 20:57, 5 November 2025 (UTC)
Is there a source for the woman's pronouns being she/her as currently used in the body of the article? If so, they should also be added to the infobox and additionally cited just as the gender is. If not, they/them should be used for ambiguity. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:41, 3 November 2025 (UTC)- Fixed. Stake black msg 20:57, 5 November 2025 (UTC)
- Some of the instances of she/her are ambiguous now but there are a few left. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:33, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
- I think I got them all now. Stake black msg 10:21, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
- Some of the instances of she/her are ambiguous now but there are a few left. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:33, 8 November 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed. Stake black msg 20:57, 5 November 2025 (UTC)
It looks like the woman has some freckles as well; this should be mentioned in the body. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:48, 3 November 2025 (UTC)- I had another go at it, please take a look. Stake black msg 07:56, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
Lew
I think the first part should be split into 2 sentencesLewisr (talk) 00:24, 9 November 2025 (UTC)The hair could just be mentioned alongside the other descriptive info about themLewisr (talk) 00:24, 9 November 2025 (UTC)- Both done. Stake black msg 21:51, 9 November 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:30, 10 November 2025 (UTC)