Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified umbrella-like creature (second nomination)

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Unidentified umbrella-like creature

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Liverpool92Ackbar HS 00:21, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. Nice work! - Cwedin(talk) 00:36, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Objections handled via Discord OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 06:13, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
  4. Cumulonimbus Cloud (Talk) 23:42, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Man, Axinal was one of the first users I interacted with on this site. Imperators II(Talk) 08:18, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

Cwedin
  • The quote should be updated to match the Disney+ subtitles. (And audio would be a nice touch, but it's not required.) - Cwedin(talk) 21:44, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The infobox says the eye colour is dark, while the body says black. Please make this consistent.
  • The second paragraph should mention the location of the events described, i.e. Endor.
  • I see that you're trying to vary the language between the quote and the article body, but the use of the word "frightened" here is conjectural. A synonym to "startled" should be used instead. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:40, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. I couldn't think of a good synonym, feel free to add one if you'd like. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 20:45, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • The species is not notable enough for an article. In fact, saying that this is a species is speculation. This species article should be changed into a character article. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:57, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:18, 22 April 2021 (UTC)