Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified speeder (Grand Army of the Republic)

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Unidentified speeder (Grand Army of the Republic)

  • Nominated by: Tm_T (Talk) 00:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I know you love it, you definately do.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. Hey, why not? Menkooroo 01:30, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ECvote -- 1358 (Talk) 11:20, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Jujiggum
    • What evidence do you have for this being "presumably" a 2-seat variant of the BARC speeder? This sounds like speculation to me.
      • Hopefully sufficiently fixed
        • Okay, but please check your grammar here. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
          • Is it ok now? --Tm_T (Talk) 05:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • The BTS should specify why this is ambiguously canon.
      • Apparently isn't, tag removed
        • You mean this is non-canon? Then it needs to be tagged as such, and you should also mention that in the BTS. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
          • Apparently licensed toys are canon as is.
            • Okay; I've stricken the objection, but it would probably still be good to make a BTS note of its canonicity, just noting that liscenced toys are canon. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:58, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
              • Done. --Tm_T (Talk) 05:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
                • Hey, just letting you know that I removed the little bit that said it was canon because now that it says that it was liscenced, it's unneeded. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • Also, where did you get the "BARC-2 speeder" name? If it's conjectural, then it shouldn't be bolded in full form in the intro.
      • Bolding removed, some explanation about the name in the Bts.
        • Please check your grammar in the BTS; also, since the name is completely conjectural, I would suggest actually moving the title of the article to something more appropriate. Maybe something along the lines of "Unidentified speeder (BARC design)" or something similar. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:08, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
          • Would "Unidentified speeder (Grand Army of the Republic) or equivalent do? --Tm_T (Talk) 18:01, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
            • Sounds fine to me. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:58, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
    • That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:39, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
      • Good points rised, thanks. --Tm_T (Talk) 20:39, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • Cleaned up a bit of grammar. "Sans" didn't really work, and even if it had, I don't think it's... enough of an English word to be used on an English encyclopedia. Menkooroo 01:30, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks, appreciate it. --Tm_T (Talk) 08:16, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
  • Also, I hid the table of contents with NOTOC. Menkooroo 01:35, September 2, 2010 (UTC)