Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified quadruped droid

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified quadruped droid
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Fan26
        • 1.1.2.2 Manoof
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified quadruped droid

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:03, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Old one I forgot to write up
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. —spookywillowwtalk 00:57, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 03:32, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:37, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 16:52, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan26
  • "[H]e encountered a camp containing several criminals, Zingo Gabnit, Turfitch, and another human" Are those three part of the criminals or seperate from them? If it's the former it should be a colon not a comma there, and if it's the latter it should be worderd more clearly. Fan26 (Talk) 20:19, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:45, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Did the droid kneel down and then boba fett dismounted? It's currently phrased the other way Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:47, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Can't say this one for certain, there's just a panel of the droid kneeling outside the cantina, tried to reword accordingly
  • Equipment in the infobox should note the saddle and reins Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:47, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done
  • Can Sensor in the infobox be yellow? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:47, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done
  • Just make sure this is ok. For reference, the archivedate was removed as it was adding the page to a maintenance category for duplicate archivedates due to it already being captured in Template:Marvel/Archive. :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:47, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Don't totally understand what's happening there but all good Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:35, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Essentially the archivedate for that url is already captured on the /archive page, so adding it on the actual template use means it has two archivedates. All good if you don't get it though, I consider these sofixits as they don't impact the reader's experience. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:37, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Should the description not be presented before its history? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:53, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:52, 2 May 2022 (UTC)