Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified pilot (senflax)

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Unidentified pilot (senflax)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:55, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: And now for something completely different.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Menkooroo 10:33, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Hanzo Hasashi 15:35, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
  3. A man...with three buttocks. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:07, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:04, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. Imperators II
    • Again, I think you should add to the Bts section that the pilot was not named in Dynasty of Evil. Otherwise, good job. Imperators II(Talk) 17:53, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Jujiggum
    • There's enough info to subsection into a biography and an intro. I doubt that it will bring the article over 250 words, but there's enough information that it should still be done.
      • Done.
    • The article's name needs some kind of additional identifier. We already have a ton of "unidentified pilot" articles. Please add at least "male," and I would suggest some sort of further parameter in parentheses at the end, as well.
      • Actually, as there will certainly be other unidentified male pilots in the future, you may want to go for something like "Unidentified pilot (senflax patient)" or something to that effect. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 18:15, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
        • …which is exactly why I suggested adding a further specifying parameter in parentheses as well. :P Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:25, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
          • Moved.
    • You have a brief tense deviation in the artcle. Please ensure that you stay strictly within the past tense in all IU sections.
    • Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:04, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
    • As a note: I've removed the link to Doctor, because the article isn't about just anyone who heals, it's about people who hold the title; and as I recall, Caleb didn't hold that title. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:04, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • You might want to get rid of the table of contents. I think all CA's are supposed to have none. However, I have seen CA's with table of contents as well. Hanzo Hasashi 15:35, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
    • For future reference, you are supposed to get rid of them. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:07, March 31, 2011 (UTC)