Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified musical composition (second nomination)

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified musical composition
    • 1.1 (0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Exiled Jedi
        • 1.1.2.2 Manoof
      • 1.1.3 Comments
      • 1.1.4 Vote to strike objection (EC only)

Unidentified musical composition

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 20:12, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Getting my status articles back up to....well, status.

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Support

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • There are a few details from the book that need to be mentioned:
    • The piece used vibrations that were based on Bith biorhythms and brainwaves.
    • It took a week for the music to cause the Bith to have erratic behavior.
    • Every Bith that had violent outbursts attended multiple Shlurr performances.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 21:41, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
      • Should all be taken care of. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 22:46, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
  • Right now the article is at 233 words, with more than half the words being in the main body. There is easily enough here for you to write an introduction, section the article, and take it to the GAN page.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:56, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Based on the RPGseed tamplate's usage, the investigation and related discover doesn't necessarily happen, or does it? I ask since the BTS mentions the players escort the wookiee off-planet, but nothing else. The two should probably be consistent with each other (and obviously the source). Manoof (talk) 08:45, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
    • To interject, RPGseed information is included in the body of articles, which is why we have the template.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:15, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
      • To clarify, the BTS says the players escort the wookiee, but nothing on the investigation and outcome thereof. But the article main indicates player involvement with the investigation and outcome, and this needs to be clarified. Manoof (talk) 19:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
  • I fixed it, but as a reminder, the infobox's closing "}}" should be on the same line as the last attribute, without any space after the "=". Manoof (talk) 08:45, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to strike objection (EC only)

  1. ECvote Unanswered objections over a week old.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:02, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ECvote FACE Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:03, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Aww, Ferdy. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 22:03, June 20, 2015 (UTC)