Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified dojo (Naporar)

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Unidentified dojo (Naporar)

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:46, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: fun fact this is my second favorite star wars scene
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:CHISS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:21, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
2. Samonic 11:39, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 17:41, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:25, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Ar'alani's quarters (which will need a page; maybe another CAN for you too!) are located above the dojo. This will have to be specified.
• Missing link to gender.
• You need to specify that the pair went from the gallery to the admiral's quarters, and then to the dojo.
• Description goes before history. So -> location + equipment -> ar'alani vs kilji-killer.
• If we are sharing fun facts, I also enjoyed this scene, but my favorite scene is "Jixtus" threatening Nakirre with fine sand.
• Dating needed. Samonic 20:38, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
  • all done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:59, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Gender must be linked in its first mention. Samonic 11:42, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
• Please add a quote.
• Missing link to standard year in the date note.
• Category:Chiss Ascendancy should be Category:Chiss Ascendancy locations, and as Category:Naporar locations is a subcategory of Ascendancy locations, it should be removed. Please remove Category:Chiss Ascendancy. Samonic 11:42, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk)

Fan

• Remove the mention of nation since that article is about to be TC'd.
• I don't think what Thrawn and Ziara were doing before their sparring match is relevant to the dojo article. Fan26 (Talk) 13:41, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
  • both removed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:19, 26 August 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Is that your typo in the quote or the sources? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:36, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
  • my typo. oops BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:59, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
• Am I right in thinking that it isn't clear if the quarters and dojo are a part of the academy? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:36, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Resolved via discord—nothing determines if they are connected and it would be an assumption to say so Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:21, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please mention the Ascendancy trilogy in the bts. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:41, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:27, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:25, 4 September 2022 (UTC)