Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified communications officer (Lillibanca)

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Unidentified communications officer (Lillibanca)

• Nominated by: Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 20:40, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional):Novels

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:01, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:04, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:57, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 21:10, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
5. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:24, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan26

• The second sentence is a little long. Fan26 (Talk) 22:49, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Broken up. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 21:47, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Are ship names not italicized by the source?
  • They are, am I blind?
    • In the quote, they currently aren't. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:42, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
      • I am indeed blind, fixed.
• No corresponding article for "firestorm" or the capitalized "Number One"?
  • No to both. Also it doesn't specify if it's a specific beacon, or just the first one placed in the series. I don't think it's article worthy.
    • Well now the capitalization is currently inconsistent in the body and quote. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:42, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 02:55, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
• Appearances say character was mentioned while BTS contradicts this. Does the character physically appear in the novel or is only their voice heard? UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:35, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 00:51, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Don't forget the 1st. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:42, 26 November 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• A {{Youmay}} to the other unidentified communications officer would be nice. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:41, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 02:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Please see my copy-edit
• The infobox's name field should have the full conjectural title OOM 224 08:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for the review. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 04:16, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• No mention in the abridged audiobook. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 20:40, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:38, 7 December 2021 (UTC)