Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified bluedock foreman

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Unidentified bluedock foreman

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Unidentified Quesoth Worker
  • The foreman being affiliated with the Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet isn't supported by the source and is infobox exclusive.
  • Context for bluedock. (e.g space station)
  • The lead quote provides material for a mini P+T section. "I'd love to see the Council try their hand at this job. The Ascendancy would never fly again."
  • You should specify that Mid Captain Ufsa'mak'ro was the first officer of the Springhawk.
  • I'd say it's worth mentioning that the foreman supervised the Springhawk's repairs after the Lioaoin skirmish.
  • Brief mentions about the foreman's comments being sarcastic, about him considering the "extra tank of plasma sphere fluid" nonsense, and that he would appreciate Thrawn asking him for the tank in person should be added. You should add that the foreman was pleased by Samakro's compliment, and that the Springhawk was severely damaged. (Compliment/Damage)
  • Review notes:
    • Specify a starship's class first, (e. g. Chiss heavy cruiser) not their class's classification. (e.g heavy cruiser)
    • The […] should be separated from a quote's text.
    • Remember that when pipelinking, all characters must be placed inside the link brackets. This includes plurals, possessives, italics, prefixes, and suffixes.
    • Contractions shouldn't be used. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 12:45, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
      • mostly done. choosing not to mention the plasma spheres thing and thrawn because it would be awfully play by play. same with adding the Lioaoin skirmish, its irrelevant to the foreman imo. thanks for the review notes BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 19:01, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

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