Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Yarkora pit fighter

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Unidentified Yarkora pit fighter

• Nominated by: Bonzane10 (holonet) 05:28, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 05:12, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 129 words (0 introduction, 89 body, 40 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP: COMICS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. copy-edit to note; did some colorpicking and the tunic seems much more brown than red, open to discuss if felt otherwise though.—spookywilloww^talk
   • I don't mind the change, the panels were too small and I don't do well with colors sometime. Bonzane10 (holonet) 20:28, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 15:51, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
3. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:32, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:10, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• Nar Shaddaa context.
  • Added
• Seems like the comic's page provides a usable dating ref for its events.
  • Added
• BtS should indicate the comic's author and illustrator.
  • Added
• Seems like there's some clothing/equipment that can be added.—spookywilloww^talk 20:14, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added Bonzane10 (holonet) 03:00, 3 August 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• I think it would be worth including that they fought at the Garkata Fighting Arena, since you later mention the arena, but there's no link to it or prior mention Lewisr (talk) 19:30, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added Bonzane10 (holonet) 20:28, 3 August 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• You should mention the comic's series in the BTS. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:55, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added Bonzane10 (holonet) 00:58, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:10, 9 August 2023 (UTC)