Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Trandoshan waitress

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Unidentified Trandoshan waitress

  • Nominated by: Zed42 (talk) 20:58, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:29, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:34, February 5, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 23:36, February 8, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:05, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Actlyon needs more context for its region. Its article says it's in the Outer Rim, but the information isn't present in this article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:39, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added. Zed42 (talk) 11:12, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky
  • Not super important, but it would be nice to see mentioned that the cantina in which she worked was in a seedy district of Actlyon City; gives insight to when she's taken for unpaid debts.
  • For the last sentence, is there another word that could be used to avoid 'grab' twice?—spookywillowwtalk 16:49, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • Addressed both objections. Zed42 (talk) 18:26, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:58, February 10, 2020 (UTC)