Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified T-series tactical droid (Coruscant)

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Unidentified T-series tactical droid (Coruscant)

Nominated by: Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 00:21, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
Nomination comments: An important enough droid to the Republic since its in prison rather than decapitated like previous tactical droids.

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

501st dogma^(talk) 11:59, August 9, 2013 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:04, August 14, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:35, August 16, 2013 (UTC)
- ~~Just noticed one thing.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:57, August 19, 2013 (UTC)~~
Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:21, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
Trip391 (talk) 22:39, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
Nice to see a new face on the CAN page :) Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 07:24, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object

~~If it appears, get an image. Cade Calrayn 00:26, August 3, 2013 (UTC)~~
- It might be hard to get a good enough image of the tactical droid since it's barely shown. Plus you can only see it through the security screen. I'll see if JMAS can probably get a good enough view. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 20:26, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
  - It's barely noticeable, but I've got an image in place now. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 03:00, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
    - Thanks for the image. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 19:04, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
501st
- ~~You need a behind the scenes.~~
  - Added
    - Its up to you if you want to keep mention of the first droid. You can get away with just saying that in appeared in episode "so and so." If you choose to keep mention of the other droid, context on Florrum will be necessary. Just saying that it is a planet will suffice. On that not, please state in the body that Geonosis, Ryloth, and the other one are all worlds/planets.
      - I made the bts section more simpler.
        You might want to mention his appearance in the episode guide on Star Wars.com. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:32, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
        Added. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 16:48, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
- ~~Mention of its height needs to be in body.~~
  - I don't know where to put that information since it's more of a characteristic. You're welcome to add it if you would like.
    - You should do it, as this is your nomination. Just start a sentence off with "Standing (x) meters in height, this tactical droid....." or something like that. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:06, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
      - I found a place for this and added it in the biography. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 19:39, August 4, 2013 (UTC)
- ~~Technically, you do not need an intro, as it is not over 200 words. Keep it or kill it, your choice.~~
  - I'll just keep it since we might see the droid later on.
    - Never mind, do to your addition the article is over 200 words, which requires and intro.
- ~~Add __NOTOC__ to the top of the page to kill the table of contents, as it is unneeded in articles of this size.~~
  - Added
- Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:44, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
  - Thank you. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 20:26, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
EJ's post-support objection
- ~~I just noticed that the second sentence of the bio is way too long. Could you split that up?~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:54, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
  - Yeah, the sentence was way too long. It's now divided into two. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 19:04, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

- CC-8
  - ~~This may be tricky but do you reckon you could come up with a way to link with the planets mentioned here rather than just the battles.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 10:54, August 27, 2013 (UTC)
    - I see your point, but I don't think it's possible to link both the planets and the battles at the same time, especially since this is only 200 word long article. Is it really necessary? Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 01:56, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
      - Scratch what I just said, I found a way to link both the planets and the battles. Though I'm not sure if you can do what I just did since I have never seen it before in an article. Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 02:01, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
        I don't think that quite works. My suggestion would be to pipelink to them in "following their defeats."
        
        ~~Also, Emir links to the wrong article.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 06:54, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
        How is it now? Darth Pythonis ^(Talk) 00:38, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

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