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Unidentified Sullustan cryptologist

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 19:49, October 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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Support

  1. LordMominutiae (talk) 22:56, October 4, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:04, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 13:58, October 12, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:56, October 13, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • The infobox says the Republic military, while the body says Grand Army.
  • "She was recalled by clone commando RC-1136 for a memorably unpleasant lesson on encryption techniques" I find this to be worded a little confusingly, please reword it. Fan26 (Talk) 13:45, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've tried to clarify this a bit, but after an embarrassingly long time looking at it, I couldn't come up with a better way of wording it. Any thoughts? TK-462 (talk) 19:21, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
      • Honestly I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean. Did he recall as in he remembered the lesson? Or did he recall her as in summon her back for this lesson? Fan26 (Talk) 13:56, October 10, 2020 (UTC)
        • Ah, I can see where that could be confusing. I've fixed it. TK-462 (talk) 16:29, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • Hmm, if this happened before war broke out, that would likely place it before the formation of the Grand Army, and when the Kamino clone program wasn't yet affiliated with the Republic. Does the book explicitly identify her as affiliated w/ the Republic? Fan26 (Talk) 16:37, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • It doesn't. Would it be fair to say that she's affiliated with Kamino then, like the cloners themselves? TK-462 (talk) 17:11, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • If the book gives no information re her allegiance, than we can't assume she's affiliated with anything. Fan26 (Talk) 23:09, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
        • Thank you, it's fixed. TK-462 (talk) 00:40, October 12, 2020 (UTC)
          • Please alter the body to reflect this. Fan26 (Talk) 01:03, October 12, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:35, October 15, 2020 (UTC)