Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Republic operative

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Unidentified Republic operative

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 15:48, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For those of you who were wondering, when Project Hero runs out of CAN-able articles, I'm moving on to the Codex. :P Cade Calrayn 15:48, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Nice work.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:43, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:21, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
3. 501st dogma^(talk) 12:57, March 11, 2013 (UTC)
4. — DigiFluid^{(Whine here)} 15:01, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
5. Winterz (talk) 19:41, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Any way you can split this up? Granted unlimited authority and a large sum of credits by the initiative's leader, General Var Suthra of the Republic Military, the operative progressed with the Power Guard project on the neutral moon of Nar Shaddaa in absolute secrecy until[2] the year 3,643 BBY,[1] when the project was uncovered by the Empire and the man was tortured to death by the Sith Lord Sadic..—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:04, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
   • Done. Cade Calrayn 19:38, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
     • One more thing: Source his location of death in the infobox.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:39, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
       • Done. Cade Calrayn 20:41, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
2. — DigiFluid^{(Whine here)} 14:30, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
   • Grammar: The very beginning "An male"....nope. That's not how a/an works ;) Otherwise, looks solid to me.
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 14:59, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
3. Ah-ah!
   • The Bts uses too many "first mentioned", please tweak it a bit in order to avoid repetition.
     • Done.
   • Also in the Bts, you refer to the individual as "man". Correct this, sir. Winterz (talk) 18:04, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
     • Ugh. Cade Calrayn 18:33, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

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