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Unidentified Nihil underling
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:25, 15 May 2022 (UTC)
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Support
- Nihil? What is this The High Republic content? :P — Samonic
07:38, 16 May 2022 (UTC) - RattsT (talk) 20:22, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 12:40, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:46, 24 May 2022 (UTC)- OOM 224 17:30, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
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Ratts
The other speaker should be included in the quote attribution.RattsT (talk) 11:03, 16 May 2022 (UTC)- Good catch.
Redlink should be created.- I'm a little confused on this - is Cloud a rank (as per Cloud (rank)) or a group thing?
- It's both. A Cloud is the name of both a type of unit in the Nihil as well as the highest ranking member of that unit. RattsT (talk) 09:50, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
- Stubbed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:52, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
- It's both. A Cloud is the name of both a type of unit in the Nihil as well as the highest ranking member of that unit. RattsT (talk) 09:50, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
- I'm a little confused on this - is Cloud a rank (as per Cloud (rank)) or a group thing?
Some brief context should be provided for how that attack went, since it's presumed the underling took part.RattsT (talk) 11:22, 16 May 2022 (UTC)- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:39, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
"who had not yet learned her place " doesnt feel quite NPOV. can we make it more NPOV by saying "who was still learning her place as a subuordinate of the cloud leader. I'm guessing she wasnt supposed to talk or something, can that be made any clearer? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 02:16, 23 May 2022 (UTC)- That language is directly stated by the source and it doesn't really elaborate, so I've reworded it to try and make it a little more formal.
The fact shes Nihil isnt noted in the body Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 02:16, 23 May 2022 (UTC)- Added more explicitly. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:27, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
OOM
Why not mention that she thought the goal was to dazzle and confuse, per the quote?OOM 224 13:55, 25 May 2022 (UTC)- Added some more detail. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:52, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:30, 25 May 2022 (UTC)