Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Nautolan musician

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Unidentified Nautolan musician

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LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Just check the edit I made in relation to the objection, I think "powers" was too vague but other articles used governments which I think is much clearer to connect the two statements :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:23, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:42, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:19, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

~~It would be nice to have a bit more context for the Barbed ginx. Just saying that they were amphibian creatures should do the trick.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:05, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- Both done, did not know we had a musician infobox type Fan26 (Talk) 17:34, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

~~Can you give context that the two opposing powers are those of the galactic war? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:51, 12 January 2022 (UTC)~~
- Tbh I think it is pretty clear who the oppossing powers are based on prior context and I haven't been asked to do this on the other nominations where I've used identical or at least similar language, but if you really think it's neccesary I'll put it in. Fan26 (Talk) 03:21, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
  - I do think it needs something, even if its "opposing powers of the war" Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:19, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

~~Why is the bit on Glee Anselm relavant here?~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:02, 2 February 2022 (UTC)
- It's mentioned in the mission ("A popular Nautolan musician would like very much to own a pair of ginxes, which are banned as pets on Glee Anselm. Have your companion work out a plan to get her what she desires.") and I would say the pretty clear implication is that she's asking for help smuggling it onto Glee Anselm. Would you say I should contextualise it as the Nautolan homeworld? Fan26 (Talk) 13:09, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
  - Yes, particularly since Nautolans don't share a name with their homeworld that seems like important context for readers. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:59, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
    - Checked with Imp, and The New Essential Guide to Alien Species does identify Glee Anselm as the homeworld and in the Mid Rim. Fan26 (Talk) 00:11, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:19, 6 February 2022 (UTC)