Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Mon Calamari cruiser (Sullust system)

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Unidentified Mon Calamari cruiser (Sullust system)

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:35, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: After like 5 years of asking around and at least 1 year of actual research here and there and I've finally found new information that was elusive to fleet junkies. Hopefully I'm able to expand this article further in the years to come :)
• Date Archived: 16:08, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 303 words (0 introduction, 135 body, 168 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. OOM 224 (he/him) 11:46, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
2. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:17, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:18, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 03:57, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 16:07, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Engine is infobox-exclusive. Maybe append "via engines" to the end of the body's first sentence?
  • Fixed. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:49, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
• Would be nice to include publication years in the BTS. OOM 224 (he/him) 17:42, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Done, thanks. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:49, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• According to Jocasta the word count is 370. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:47, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Dang, okay thanks. I'll nominate it for good status --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:53, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Having looked at the word count, the body is currently at 138, which warrants desectioning. The nomination can stay up. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:41, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
      • De-sectioned --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:39, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
• Referencing for the fact that it was a cruiser is inconsistent between the infobox and body. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:38, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:58, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• Star Wars Archives can be listed as a source. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:18, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Do I use (cut) or are you referring to Star Wars Storyboards? Storyboards is listed as a Legends book, so not sure. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:58, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Nevermind. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:00, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• Reagrding the last 2 sentences of the 2nd paragraph, why is it necessary to list the other types of ship? I feel you can just cut most of it and say there was at least one type of this cruiser amongst others (without listing the others) shortly before the fleet jumped into hyperspace Lewisr (talk) 21:33, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:02, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:07, 26 June 2023 (UTC)